СТРУКТУРА ЭССЕ В ЕГЭ 2017 ПО АНГЛИЙСКОМУ ЯЗЫКУ
| Абзац | Предложение | Образец | |||||
| 1. Вступление (introduction) | Обозначение проблемы | Nowadays, | the problem of … causes great argument and controversy. | ||||
| In today’s world, | |||||||
| the issue of … is considered to be a matter of common concern/the main concern of … | |||||||
| Комментарий к проблеме | Some people believe that … while others think… | ||||||
| On the one hand, … on the other hand …. | |||||||
| Риторический вопрос | Where is the truth? | ||||||
| Who is right? | |||||||
| 2. Выражение собственного мнения | Тезис | In my opinion, … | |||||
| As for me, I believe that… | |||||||
| My personal view is that… | |||||||
| 1 аргумент | To begin with, | ||||||
| To start with, | |||||||
| Firstly, | |||||||
| 2 аргумент | What is more, | ||||||
| Furthermore, | |||||||
| Secondly, | |||||||
| 3 аргумент | Finally, | ||||||
| Additionally, | |||||||
| Thirdly, | |||||||
| 3. Выражение противопо-ложного мнения | Тезис | However, there exists another point of view on this issue. | |||||
| Nevertheless, one can consider this problem from another angle. | |||||||
| 1 аргумент | First of all, | ||||||
| The first thing to be considered is … | |||||||
| 2 аргумент | Another fact is that … | ||||||
| Besides, | |||||||
| 4. Несогласие с мнением оппонентов | Тезис + 1-й контраргумент | Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot share it because … | |||||
| Nevertheless, I cannot agree with this statement, because… | |||||||
| 2- й контраргумент | Moreover, one should not ignore the fact that… | ||||||
| Finally, … | |||||||
| 5. Заключение | Вывод | In conclusion, | I would like to say that | the problem of… is still to be discussed. | |||
| Taking into consideration all mentioned above, | It is important to understand… | ||||||
| Комментарий | As far as I am concerned, the point is to… | ||||||
УНИВЕРСАЛЬНЫЙ ШАБЛОН ЭССЕ ПО АНГЛИЙСКОМУ ЯЗЫКУ
Nowadays, the problem of … causes great argument and controversy. Some people believe that … while others think …. Who is right?
In my opinion, …. To begin with, …. What is more, …. Additionally,….
However, there exists another point of view on this issue. First of all, …. Besides, ….
Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot share it because…. ….
In conclusion, I would like to say that the problem of … is still to be discussed. As far as I am concerned, the point is to…
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ОБРАЗЕЦ ГОТОВОГО ЭССЕ ЕГЭ ПО АНГЛИЙСКОМУ ЯЗЫКУ
· Comment on the following statement:
In order to get a good education one should go abroad.
What is your opinion? Write 200–250 words. Use the following plan:
− make an introduction (state the problem)
− express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons for your opinion
− express an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for this opposing opinion
− explain why you don’t agree with the opposing opinion
− make a conclusion restating your position
Nowadays, the problem of studying abroad causes great argument and controversy. Some people think that one can get a better education only in another country, others believe that it is possible to study at home. Where is the truth?
In my opinion, studying abroad is more advantageous because one can gain useful experience. To begin with, it can have a positive impact on students’ self-discipline as youngsters become more initiative and acquire quickness in comprehension. Moreover, it gives them a chance to learn more about the culture of the other country and improve their language skills. Additionally, it is a splendid opportunity to make new friends.
However, there exists another point of view on this issue. First of all it is very expensive to study abroad. Moreover, one should not ignore the fact that, children have to adapt to many things, thus, it can be stressful for them.
Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot share it because there are a lot of exchange programmes wich are funded by government, therefore, students can study abroad for free. Besides, a person should learn to cope with stress if he or she would like to go the university to broaden their mind.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the problem of studying abroad is still to be discussed. I believe that one should analyze and compare all pros and cons before making a proper decision where to get an education.
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ПРАВИЛА НАПИСАНИЯ ЭССЕ В ЕГЭ
· Считайте слова
Обязательно нужно уложиться в заданный объём: 200-250 слов (допускается отклонение на 10% в обе стороны, т.е. 180-275 слов). Если в эссе ≤179 слов, то за задание ставится 0 баллов. Если ≥276 слов, то проверяются только первые 250 слов. Помните, что 1 слово – это всё, что находится между двумя пробелами. Дефисы (-), и апострофы (’) не являются пробелами, поэтому слова из разряда world’s, open-minded, UK, считаются за одно слово. Тренируйтесь писать письма на экзаменационных бланках – так вы научитесь на глазок определять количество слов и будете меньше тратить времени на их подсчёт.
· Пишите в официальном стиле
Нельзя использовать сокращения (только полные формы I am, cannot), а также начинать предложения с неформальных слов-связок well, also, but). Используйте безличные формы глагола (one should). Богатый словарный запас и разноообразие грамматических и синтаксических конструкций демонстрирует высокий уровень знания английского языка.
· Правильно рассчитайте время
На выполнение этого задания выделите себе 40 минут: 20 минут на черновик, 15 мин. на чистовик и 5 мин. на подсчёт слов и проверку. Обязательно проверьте эссе перед сдачей!
Верьте в себя, и всё получится! Желаем удачи!